At a party I mead friend with a young woman.She said, ''It is good that all people are very glad''.I said.'' yes I belive that laughing is good for may health.It is important that you can always keep your self happy,''she said.I asked, '' How old are you ?'' She said, '' How old I am is not important. It is important that I am a successful person,''She said.After 20 minutes I met Mary.She is my friend.She said,'' I'm sorry I forgot to give you a glass of orange juice.''My new friend said,''your friend is very nice. Can you tell me whether she is married or not?''She asked.I said,''No she is single.''She said, ''can you tell me what she does?''I said, ''what she saide is none of my business?'' She said, ''Can you tell me what time the party finishes?'' I said, '' what time the party finishes dose not matter for me.''

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not a nice story
you have used a lot of direct quoted sentences with wrong punctuation