Is the attached file enough or I should add / put some more exercise .

hi.that was good but some points to be corrected;
1.IN TEHRAN NOT AT Tehran
2.WHICH CERTIFICATE DID SHE GET
3.DOES SHE HAVE ANY DEGREE ? YES SHE HAS
4.HOW MUCH DOSE SHE WEIGH NOT WEIGHT
5. IAM BROAD-SHOUlDERED NOT BROAD
6.Please write a conversation form also for CHARACTER the same as other topics you've done.thanks